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 Отправлено: 06.06.06 23:10. Заголовок: Vote: Как вам песня?

Песня моя на ОСТ из ФФ9 You're not alone...

Here,now and today,
We deciding our own fate...
Don't just giving in,
Do not fear their will!

Do now, what you can
Or don't pretend be a man,
You're know, that you're not alone!

Do now, what you can
Do not fear these men!
Fight with all your will!
Cause you know--you're not alone!

Do now, what you can
You're now a strongest man
With this power in
There's nothing to fear.

Now get up from knees
stand and fight for
all these whom you're love!

There is no time
For your doubts, even right!
Cause you are in love

Make you feels burn bright
I am know, that you still can fight
So do not hold back!

If you lose your way
ask me to prey
for your lost soul...


Laharl 06.06.06

 Отправлено: 07.06.06 01:03. Заголовок: Re:

Здорово, да ты поэт =)
А про Фанту можешь че-нить сочинить?

 Отправлено: 07.06.06 06:50. Заголовок: Re:

*оффтопик*

 Отправлено: 16.06.06 19:51. Заголовок: Re:

Можно немного грамматической критики?..

цитата:

«Here,now and today, We deciding our own fate... Don't just giving in, Do not fear their will! Do now, what you can Or don't pretend be a man, You're know, that you're not alone! Do now, what you can Do not fear these men! Fight with all your will! Cause you know--you're not alone! Do now, what you can You're now a strongest man With this power in There's nothing to fear. Now get up from knees stand and fight for all these whom you're love! There is no time For your doubts, even right! Cause you are in love Make you feels burn bright I am know, that you still can fight So do not hold back! If you lose your way ask me to prey for your lost soul...»

В подробности не вдавался, просто выделил то, что на первый взгляд режет слух.

C точки зрения грамматики:
We are deciding
Dont just give in
the strongest man
You love
смысл фразы even right - ?
your feelings
I know
Pray

 Отправлено: 17.06.06 18:40. Заголовок: Re:

1 Это первая редакция............. Неисправленная, вторую я уже загнал за 1.5к руб одному влюбленному психу..
2 Послушайте как Я ее спел))))

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 Отправлено: 24.06.06 11:48. Заголовок: Re:

Омг, я даже во время пьянки на даче такого не слышал